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" Our first priority is to get you well. Then work on our relationship. I don't know what's going to happen with us, but I know I want to try. Do you?" Luke asked
"Luke, I'll do anything for a chance with you. Anything you want. All I ask is that you let me help you take care of Sean Anderson. I want him to pay for what he did to me. To us. I know you aren't going to let him go unpunished." She begged
"Allright. You've earned that right. But it will be awhile. I don't want to be linked to his disappearance. You get well first. Then we'll deal with that asshole. I promise. I know how to make him really pay for his crimes. Just wait." He assured her
He hugged her tight. "It's okay, Baby. Tomorrow is a new day. For both of us."
The End of Part II.
Look for Part III "The Final Revenge" Coming soon!
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoAs hard as it is to believe I have known people in the military that has done crazy stuff like this.
Ruttweilerover 1 year agoNo one will stop you from putting down the most illogical plots, boringly cardboard-like characters, and insipid dialog.
You have complete freedom to make an absolute ass of yourself and reveal yourself to be an abysmally poor writer.
Kaeyoover 1 year agoTrotted out the Super Marine Ninja Ranger Seal. Sometimes suspension of disbelief is near impossible.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThat was awful. He dumps her for having one guy on the side but takes her back after she fucks hundreds? Riddled with STDs, missing teeth, and covered in tats and piercings? Sure, show some empathy and help her out. Feel guilty for BTB. Shows your human. But there is no "relationship" to work on. Please delete ch. 2 and skip ch. 3 as well.
Sexecutioneralmost 3 years agoFirst part was righteous, now you turned him into a RAAC wimp. So fucking unrealistic. Won't bother with the rest of this turd.
And the next Anonymous cuck boy who responds with weak ass shit at me? Well we know just what kind of spinless cocksucker you are....
