Marie Ch. 03

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LaLaLady
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She had almost changed her mind, she had a fleeting thought of taking Marie to her bedroom and changing, but she couldn't pass up the opportunity to end this charade Donovan was perpetrating a bit sooner. Marie was a passing fancy and he was allowed, but after five years of waiting on Donovan, Amanda was ready for a change.

Amanda saw a shadow approaching the stairwell and quickly straightened out her gown. She had put on Donovan's favorite dress. He'd bought it for her in Paris, a sky blue silk Chanel gown that hugged her frame, moved like second skin and brought out her blue eyes. Donovan had once told her the dress made her eyes look like "the Moroccan sky on a clear Spring day". Amanda pasted on a winning smile and waited for him to make his way down to the party. Her smile melted when she saw Marie with her arm looped through Donovan's. His hand rested on top of it as they made their way down the stairs and stood directly in front of Amanda.

Donovan's black eyes landed on Amanda and he smiled slightly. "You and I will discuss this later."

Amanda's stomach clenched and her heart began to pound, but she just nodded in response. He knew. Donovan knew that she had taken Marie to him and he knew her intentions in doing so. Amanda gazed at Donovan and Marie as they walked into the party, their backs to her. Marie looked over her shoulder and winked at her, a move that seemed so cold and calculated that Amanda's heart beat even faster. She turned and ran up the stairs, ripping the hem of her dress in the process, this time she took the stairwell to the right and went directly to her room.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very nice!!!

Great story so far!!! Just wondering are you gonna finish it??? I would love to see what happens next!! I think it would be cool if you made it a love triangle between Marie, Eva, and Donovan!!!! Seeing as Marie is very attracted to both of them it would be interesting to see who she would choose!!! Any ways your a great writer and I hope to see more!!!!!!

queenakasha82queenakasha82over 13 years ago
Please....

You have to write more!! I loved it! Amanda is going to have her ass haned to her! LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
wow...

i liked all 3 of the stories.... but i keep wondering, how does Marie know Donovan? it really sparked my interest to keep on reading after she called him 'My Lord'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Oh, come on now...

I'm not much into vampire stories but I really need to know what happens in this one. Are you going to finish it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
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Please do not let this story die.

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