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Click here"Do you like that daddy?" I don't think she actually asked that, but I swear I heard it.
Her finger crept up to my ass now as the lube and slobber mixed wetting down my naughtiest of areas. I felt it then as she inserted a finger tip gently and continued to stroke and lick. The combination was incredible. Ever so gently more and more of her finger inserted into me. I thought this would hurt but her finger was so thin that there was no pain.
She removed her finger and began to change position. She rolled over my leg again and placed her face on my belly, her mouth facing my angry cock. I felt her reach under me and get her hand back to my asshole.
Simultaneously, she inserted my cock in her mouth and inserted a thin sex toy in my ass. I was a hair away from reaching critical mass.
Her second push down on my cock and her second push into my ass set me on fire.
The third time the toy went deep into me, it touched a spot that I didn't know existed and I erupted in a torrent of cum.
Every muscle in my body spasmed, I held her head down on my cock as I rocketed rope after rope of seed into her throat. My ass clenched tightly around the invading toy.
I couldn't be more than a hair away from passing out.
Eventually my body settled, I released my wife's head from my slowly decreasing dick and laid back as wiped out as could be. I felt the toy being slid from my asshole and exited without a noise.
My wife's face appeared next to mine and cum was running down her chin. She was the most beautiful woman ever at that moment, sexy and slutty, a cum covered nasty little whore and yet so beautiful.
"I love you baby."
She leaned in and kissed me deep, sharing the cum on her lips in the dirtiest of kisses we've ever shared.
That doesn't detract much from the fact that you have written a 5 star piece of good pornographic fiction. Keep the series going!!
Ya know what, I came to read a story, and figured out the typo. Had a few in my story too. Was much more interested in the story I guess, it didn't bother me as much as some I guess, so there ya go. Story line hit a homer with me as I am somewhat in the mid-life issue in real life with the woman I will "till death do us part" with, for over 30 years. Never fucked around on her, so your story was kind of fun for me in that it sort of mirrors things in my real life, right down to the teen aged girl we have that is becoming a serious looker.... Member of the DADD association, Dad's against Daughters Dating! 'cause I know what I would want to do if I was on a date with her....
Well, MesaAzGuy... what do you expect from some of your readers? If that's the first thing they see, then they might not even bother checking out your story to start with.
People are pointing things out to probably help you out. I can't say for sure. I've never read any of your stories.
Very good MesaAzGuy. I hope you will continue to write here, you have a style I like. Please read my stories too.
Jay Richards
Oops. I spelled Role wrong. Kind of funny that the first comment written on my story cared so much that my biggest mistake was "Roll" vs "Role" and that I screwed up within my first sentence. To this I say... If you have real criticism for a novice hobby writer that could help, feel free to leave it, I'll gladly accept your help and advice. If you just "PLANE" didn't like it, that's okay too. But thanks for taking the time to write a long explanation for the difference in "Roll" and "Role" for all of us jackasses that occasionally "DONUT SPELLE" good.