This is a follow up to The Flat Viewing. Again, I made this up as I went along so it's got a raw feel to it, but I hope this helps it feel more real, like you're here with me.
Thanks again for the feedback comments/emails. I love hearing from you, so let me know what you think of this ;)
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Lets do it again yes
Oh fucking hell I don't know if I can cum anymore you just made me so hot. Might have to change the sheets I actually squirted, I love being dominated and when you got into it, you really did. You are too witty, adorable, sexy, charming, etc etc. Yes let's do it again soon ;) It certainly does feel more real and I think being funny makes me enjoy it more.more...
That's it... *packs bags*
You are so sexy, and funny, and OMG when you finally cut loose and said "Let's fuck....yeah" in a more primal tone, I would have given you whatever you wanted. Utterly delicious.
Adorable!
Love this story and your hilarious antics! That nervous stutter and those big exclamations of - (and I paraphrase) "Oh my god, whoa! You just moved in!
Thank you for the laugh and the climax :-)
amazing
note to self: add spurious to favorites
Brilliant! ;) :)
I am a fan because who doesn't love a libertine? ;)
You are an audio experience. I am voyeur and I imagine I watching this fun and sexy scene and having some fun of my own. ;)
Your voice inspires my imagination. Listening to you is fun and fantastic.more...
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