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The thing that bothered me most was that I knew I was falling in love with her, me, 45 years old and in love with this gorgeous waif, a girl more than young enough to be my daughter and younger than my son!
This hadn't been part of the plan, but I couldn't help it, I knew I would never tell her for fear of losing her, but all my worries were allayed that afternoon, she was in my lap in the sitting room, when she suddenly got very serious with me, here it comes I thought, time to move on, I've found a flat etc.
Jack, she said very shyly, I have something to tell you, don't bother I said I understand, you can go when you feel ready to. Go? Go where? I was just going to tell you that I love you and want to stay with you for ever; I don't think I could live without you now. Those were the sweetest words I had ever heard in my life, they brought tears to my eyes, which I quickly cleared, I was a man wasn't I! Niki, I love you too baby, I really do, happiness wasn't in this vocabulary.
Over the coming months we became inseparable, Mark had guessed because he knew me too well, but he was okay with it as he now had someone else. And Niki happily announced that she was pregnant, I was going to be a dad again after all these years, but she sadly had to give work up later in her pregnancy, and stay at home, the cleaner by the way had long been gone. Niki had rightly guessed almost immediately that I had been shagging her, and put a stop to that straight off, but made me pay her 3 months wages as recompense.
Am I happy? You bet I am, how a man of my age can not be happy when he has a beautiful young woman in his life who says she will love him eternally.
- COMMENTS
ramonbrookover 9 years agoThis is not a English class! If you want to show us the difference between "story" and "speech" then write a damn story. You have a lot of nerve tearing down someone else's effort on this site!
Loved the "STORY" and enjoyed the ending with him ending up with Niki. However I do think the girl might be a LITTLE more pissed about being, in essence, raped through being drugged! But she did like him so it all works out I guess!
Anonymousabout 10 years agoWhat could have been a very good story and you f*ck it up because you haven't got a clue how to show the difference between 'story' and "speech"!!
Get someone who attended an English lesson to explain how to do it!!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoqualitywheat, I hate to say it but your writing really sucks. Seriously. Quit writing. You're wasting bandwidth for this site. You acknowledged in another story's comments section that you sucked. Realize it then.
And don't pay attention to morons like BigDaddyRich. He applauds any story even if it started with only a comma and ends with only a period. His opinion is for morons.
