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"Jared-"
He looked at her as she called his name softly, shyly, fuck she was a vision. Her hair was no longer styled, but seductively tousled and she was in his shirt, which barely covered her ass, fuck he was so hard. If it wasn't for a meeting he had to attend today, he would definitely take her against the wall, the kitchen top and christen every single room. He stumped out his cigarette and waited for her to carry on.
God, Alin really hated him, he was staring at her with THAT look, and it made her feel so small. The worst thing was his habit of smoking, Alin hated that and he knew it, yet he was still doing it. You're not his girlfriend so why should you care? She reminded herself.
"Jared, I..." He was still staring at her, and now it turned into a hungry gaze.
"I have nothing to wear-"
He laughed, "Why would you need clothes? The things we do don't require clothes, Alin."
Now she wanted to throw a toaster at him, or whatever she could find, did he expect to have her naked in his apartment, waiting for him to call her for sex?
"Jared, I have to go to work-" she bit out angrily.
"I like you in my shirt," he noticed the irritation in her expression, "but I'll send someone to bring clothes to you." He smiled and came close to her to kiss her tenderly on the lips, "I'm going now. You are moving here tonight." Before she could respond, he silenced her with a kiss.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
When Jared left, Alin felt confusion cloud her brain, what was happening? He had been so gentle last night. Did this mean he would no longer hurt her? She hoped it was true, though she knew if he started to be nice to her she would give in...and this she definitely didn't want.
- COMMENTS
kitteh_katover 11 years agoI've always hated the stories where a character (usually the woman) gets wronged and then BLINDLY falls for the guy who wronged her.
THIS IS ONE OF THOSE STORIES!!!
I've been BATTLING with myself to stop reading this story, but I want it to turn out right!
Women don't just forgive men that cheat on them!
It's STUPID!!!
Make this a GOOD story, or so help me I'm going to SMASH my DAMN computer.
AND THEN MAKE YOU PAY FOR IT!!!
You Have Been Warned.
k_k
Anonymousalmost 12 years agohe's a dick and she's a naive idiot. this story us good but i hate how she easily falls for anything given to her, yet she is suppose to be smart?
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThe story is intriguing and sexy at times, but it's starting to bother me that poor Alin has two seemingly oblivious friends (Hallie and Ryan), a jackass dad, and two conniving, manipulative, mean-spirited men (Jared and John) in her life. Poor girl can't catch a break! Jared comes off, to me at least, as more emotionally abusive (possessive and belittling, not to mention the sexual extortion he's forcing Alin into) than anything else, and Alin really deserves better. I hope that Jared starts to be more loving and less possessive and mean in the next chapter, or else he won't make a very good romantic hero, right? If he keeps behaving as he has, Alin's caving to her sexual desires when she's with him will stop being believable. (Mind you, this is all just conjecture/opinion!)
No matter where you decide to take your story, I can't wait for the next chapter! Good luck with real life commitments--we hope to see you back here soon!
luv_romancealmost 13 years agothis is so good. i hope the conspiracy and the truth will soon come out. i do not want to see people as pawn by others. there is justice!! hahahaha.
keep writing and do it fast pleaseeeee.....
