Offspring Ch. 042

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Taking Harkon's transceiver, some Torgon parts and some specially manufactured ones they managed to put a working device together capable of crossing the distance. There was jubilation in the academy when the first Federation transmissions were heard.

Neither humans nor Torgons fancied a Federation takeover. Torgon politicians came up with an elaborate plan, what Feng and I, two centuries later, would call the Oktonian scam. They decided to build an island in the middle of the big ocean on the western hemisphere, fifty miles in diameter. The humans laughed at the idea, they didn't believe it could be done. Torgon engineers proved them wrong.

They filled everything that could float or fly with as much ballast as it could carry, moved it to the target area and sank it, creating an artificial reef. On that they build their island. Five years later it was completed.

They had known from the humans that lithium was a prized commodity in continual short supply throughout the Federation worlds. Using the vast lithium deposits as bait they contacted the Federation and offered a supply under certain conditions. A year later a Federation cruiser arrived to start negotiations.

How they explained the human negotiators who dealt with the Federation on behalf of the Faeries is not known. Perhaps no one cared. At any rate, a deal was struck and led to the conditions we know now.

A decade or so later no Torgons were left alive on the planet. Colonel Emerson does not talk about that, perhaps he himself was dead by then.

There was a lot more detail in the diaries, but for the moment I had seen enough.

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NW_bi_boyNW_bi_boyover 10 years ago
Please please please... yes I'm begging

Please finish this story. I'm going to seriously cry if our friends, your characters are left here.

I've very much enjoyed this yarn... just looking for the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Desperation!

This tale looks as though it could wrap up before too long - but when!

There are a few threads to bring together and it would be nice to have a denouement!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I hope you post the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
keep the chapters coming

I'm addicted to sci fi especially with some erotica thrown in. Story could use some more sex and I wish Mara was around more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

It's an interesting read purely from a background standpoint. Nice universe.

Sadly I find the story sorely lacking in immersion factor., much too linear and unemotional.

Everything is or happens as the hero wants and predicts, on his terms.

The infallible guy is getting boring fast. Can't even root for him because he's winning without trying. Should be the step by step guide to world domination?

Besides, the guy can go visit Cleopatra, but he can't take a hike some few years back and get perfect intel on all things Torgon from Sir Emerson or someone there directly?

Thats like he has those godlike superpowers but can't think out of the box enough to use them.

But, this may be the first chapter without anyone drinking beer. Have to wonder how they manage to do anything the way they're all inebriated all the time. Hah.

Sorry for being unregistered, posting anon and sounding grumpy. Hope there's some constructive critique here. Still a better story than most on lit, thanks.

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