Once Upon A Time...

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Roger entered the room with three of his closest and biggest friends, Bruce, Brad, and Bruno. Suffice it to say, that if David was to ever go to prison, he would have nothing to fear because he has already been through the worst of it.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
No man is this stupid

No man, who has an IQ above room temperature would allow this to happen. He'd smell a rat in a second

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Sequel?

Wish you had gone into as much detail on David's 'surprise' as you did on his wife. Maybe a sequel is in order?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Shame on you!

LOL...the least you could have done was to give David a GOOD surprise! LOL.....You're such a DOG! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hahaha

Pay back is such a bitch. Wish you've written with David screaming at Julie "You fucking slut! You tricked me!" That would be swell.

Not a bad story but couldn't award you with 100 as there were quite some mistakes in the writing. You know, the usual tenses, grammars, spellings. Basically yours were more of the careless mistakes type.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
every detail

Good ending, but I wanted him begging and sobbing. I wanted every single detail of the punishment that he deserved, and you wimped out.

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