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He wrapped his arms around me and cradled me against him like that for a while. Being in his arms felt so right and I told him that. He smiled and said that's cause I was made for them. I drifted off to sleep one more time with my arms around him.
TO BE CONTINUED.
- COMMENTS
olderman66over 11 years agoI was so taken with this and the interaction of the couple that I couldn't stop reading and enjoying every word. Well done.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoYour storytelling is so good but when you switch from 3rd person to 1st person (she versus I) it's confusing and you have to reread some to get back into the story. Having an editor would help you use the right words (wore perfume instead of woke) and make the story flow easier. I love the story but you need someone to proofread it for you and keep those typos out and story flowing.
Synclineover 16 years agoYour writing and the reactions of this couple continues to get better and better. Keep up the good work. I wonder when someone in his division will see this little piece of art film...
Anonymousover 16 years agoThese two are so hot! I loved this chapter. Thank you for two great updates so close together! Hot, hot, hot! I love how she turned his words around and claimed him as hers too. So awesome.
