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Click here'Yes, Daddy.' I breathed, forgetting myself. Keegan's cock twitched.
'Daddy, hmmm? Is that what you call Ryan?'
It was hard to answer as he continued drilling into me, but I managed to shake my head. 'No, Sir. I'm sorry, Sir, I don't know where that came from.'
'Oh don't be sorry, I like it sugar.' He increased his pace. 'Tell Daddy you love his cock in you.'
'Oh Daddy, I love your cock inside me, you're so thick I feel like I'm going to break.'
'Good girl. Now tell me you want me in your ass.'
I felt my insides freeze up. I was no stranger to anal but never with something as thick as Keegan's dick. I hesitated but his insistent pounding in my pussy was driving me insane. I'd reached that point where I couldn't say no to anything.
'Daddy, please fuck my ass. Please, Daddy, I'm such a slut and I want your fat cock deep in my ass.' I begged for him to take me.
I felt Keegan slowly slip out of my sopping pussy and press the tip of his impressive member against my asshole. I closed my eyes and tried to breathe and relax like Ryan had taught me, but I was in no way prepared. Keegan showed no mercy and rammed into my ass. I cried out and tried to get purchase on the carpet so I could move away. I tried to grab at the sofa beneath me but I couldn't move my numbed hands at all thanks to the constricting cable tie.
Keegan felt me struggling and laughed, fucking me hard and deep. Tears were rolling down my cheeks as I squealed and squirmed, but his fingers dug into my hips as he pounded my ass harder. I was sure I was going to split and tear, and the pain of his hips slamming against the welts from the earlier beating was excruciating.
I was quickly exhausted and gave in to the abuse, going limp and allowing him to masturbate into my ass. My body was racked with quiet sobs as he eventually finished, spasming into my ass and filling me with hot liquid. When Keegan released his grip on me, I rolled to the floor, too weak to stay up. He flicked the knife out and cut the cable tie around my wrists but I didn't move.
'Don't act like you didn't enjoy that,' he knelt beside me and thrust two fingers roughly into my cunt. 'You're still dripping wet.' He removed his fingers and wiped my juices on my face. 'Ask me to make you cum.'
My eyes lit up. After all that had happened I needed the endorphin rush. And he was so hot, leaning over me, panting and sweating, broad shoulders silhouetted in the low light and his tattoos faintly visible on his pale skin. 'Please,' I managed, barely above a whisper, 'Daddy, please make me cum.'
Keegan's laugh had a hard, cruel edge as he straightened up. 'I thought I told you earlier; I'm not your Master, I don't care and this is not about you.' He walked out of the room for a few seconds and then returned, dumping a pile of blankets on the floor. 'Sleep there. You don't move until Ryan comes to get you tomorrow. Understand?'
I crawled over to the blankets, humiliated, cum seeping out of my ass and a burning desire left unfulfilled. 'Yes Daddy.'
'Good girl.' Keegan said as he kicked off his boots and trousers and climbed into bed.
I fell asleep smiling.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 11 years agoAll I have to say is poor you. You should have went to the police. Who knows how many women he has done this to. Not only is he a rapist, but he's sadistic. I know in your mind since you got wet you think you enjoyed it, but that was an assault. I'm sure karma will come around him and when a big fat black dildo rams his ass in jail he'll know just how you felt.
ShawnSwiftabout 11 years agoThis story is probably the most technically sound piece I've ever seen on Literotica. Your use of adjectives, the seamless dialog, and the flow of the story are quite frankly, incredible. Your literary voice is very strong and the characterization left no doubt about who these people are/were and how they live their private lives. You are, without a doubt, extremely good at your day-job.
As you've mentioned before, this story is a work of "non-fiction," so there isn't a whole lot you could have done with the plot. That said, I didn't find the sexual part of the narrative particularly stimulating. He was, in a word, "brutal," and that left me completely cold. Your reactions to him and how he treated you showed your immense - attraction to him which "softened" it but I still couldn't get over it.
My advice to you isn't so much about the technical as it is about the parts of your life you choose to share. I'd personally stick too the more emotionally charged relationships you've been involved in and give more back-ground information pertaining to what's happening at that particular point in your life. I guess what I'm trying to say is you should "ground" the sexual in reality. That way we know who is having sex and why they're having it. That will increase our emotional investment and make us care about the individuals coupling.
As for all of the comments saying that this story doesn't belong here, I feel you are mistaken. All of the elements that make up non-consent were present. Jealousy, feelings of entitlement, a reluctant partner, force and then the taking of the forbidden fruit. The fact that she was aroused doesn't make it any more consensual. In fact, the porn industry has a term for when a woman orgasms when she doesn't want to. It's called a "whore-gasm" and is usually charged with feelings of reluctance and guilt. Rape victims occasionally experience this phenomena as well and lets just say that the emotional back-lash is fucking terrible.
I have a feeling that your low score is attributed mainly to the "white-power" reference and the fact that people can't see past the BDSM elements within the story. I for one find that ironic as they are often inter-related. Looking forward to seeing more from you and I'd like to speak with you privately about editing my story. Take care and thanks for sharing a part of yourself with the rest of us.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoAgree with the last anon, the swastika was extremely off putting. But the rest if the story was absolutely perfection.
Anonymousabout 11 years agowell written but can't deal with that - ick - stopped reading.
_penny_about 11 years agoAuthorHi all,
Thanks for your comments. To those who have been positive or offered constructive criticisms, I appreciate your support. To those who are unsure or who dislike this, I'm truly sorry that I can't please everyone. This is non-fiction so there's not much I can do about the plot line. However, I'll take stylistic criticisms into account and make notes of other comments in case I decided to write fantasy.
Story 02 has been submitted and is pending approval (it's about a slightly different chapter of my life) but I do plan to re-visit Story 01 and write the next part.
Thanks again. :)
Penny
