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Click here"Damn. It is... tight." I told her.
She giggled. "And you're not small."
I set a slower rhythm now. She told me to make long, deep movements. I made sure to push in as far as this position would allow, before almost completely withdrawing and pushing in again. I massaged the soft flesh of her ass with my hand.
"I though you didn't really like my ass." She told me.
"I said I liked your breasts better." I said, before using my hand to pinch her nipple. Her hand still moved to touched herself.
"I'm close now. You are nearly ready to come, are you not?"
I told her I was. "Good. Then give me all. And don't stop fucking me until you have filled me up with your seed."
I grinned at her use of vulgar language, and parted her legs once more. I increased the speed of my hips, starting at the slow pace but going faster and faster, until-
"Yeah, yeah, yeah! fuck. Yes. I'm going to. Going to-"
She came before I did. Her hips rocked so violently that she would have ejected my penis if I would have allowed it, but I instead only slammed it deeper in her before I came, too. I continued to slowly fuck her until my orgasm had died out completely.
I pulled out and rolled over to my back, still panting heavily. She smiled at me. "I think we've made some progress today. You certainly seem less hesitant to talk."
She threw the blankets over me and curled up next to me. I quickly fell asleep.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 12 years agoLooks like you could take lessons in english grammar. Don't ever write a story, it would be unreadable.
zellsagaraover 12 years agoI love this story don't let some dick or pussy since they don't have the guts 2 put who they r on here get u down k if u like it and someone else does who give a shit what someone will say couse they don't talk like they did over 2000 years ago keep it up I love it if u don't say so but if ur gonna put down the work at least have the balls 2 say who u r
Anonymousover 12 years agoI'm completely enjoying this tale. Maybe because i prefer to read for enjoyment rather then the cheep thrill of ripping someone else's work apart by searching for errors real or perceived ?
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe writing from a technical point of view was never awe inspiring, but now the problems are killing me. Random tense changes are everywhere. A character will finish a long speech but for some reason not seem like the were talking to the other character. Random spelling problems are present but easier to live with.
On another note, your terminology doesnt match the time at all. No one said boobs in ancient greece. Admittedly they werent speaking english. But i think we all envision speech then containing more proper words, not words used by elementary school children and porn sites.
And on that note your dirty talk was lame. It would make a warrior blush? Really? It wouldnt make my mother blush. Shed just tell you to stop swearing. You basically just had whatshername say fuck a bunch.
