Puff Adder Pt. 01

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"Is my baby blushing? Is my voice making your knees wobbly?"

"Come on man…" I moaned into the phone. I'd just forgotten I'd been blushing furiously since Duncan laid his speech on me. Actually I'd been blushing for more than fifty percent of the time since I gotten up. "Help?"

"I already did Babes. Now stop being so nervous and go knock yourself out." I could still hear his damn smile over the phone, but I was starting to get seriously annoyed.

"You're not gonna help me?" I almost screeched, incredulously.

"Sweetie, you'll be fine okay. Just stop analyzing. Good luck… Bye!"

Wh..? He hung up! He hung up! How? I groaned and turned to lean into the wall. I was gonna be sick. Wall be so gracious as to swallow me.

"Here," said Dun half-hanging out the door, handing me my bag, "go have a smoke before you talk, or she'll think you're having a heart attack."

Why was he helping me? I could tell by the creases on his forehead that he wasn't laughing at me. He smiled at me and shoved the bag into my arms before turning back into the room. I unceremoniously flopped into the concrete and whipped out a ciggie. Mmm, I love my Marlboros. I lit up and enjoyed the feel of the smoke, and the way it whirled out of my mouth. I smoked two, and when I was done I felt a lot better. I don't think when I light up, I just sit back and enjoy.

Ok Gavin. You're gonna go talk to Di like you did a hundred times back in high school. Ok. I'm calm, calm, calm. And confident. Yes, confidence is good. I pulled myself up and spread my shoulders.

I walked up to Di, and tapped her on the shoulder. "Meet me in the theatre in a minute."

Here is an explanation of some of the words I used.

Bundus/Bundu - Southern African slang for bush

Braii - South African version of barbecue (in my opinion, the better version. Lol)

Koeksisters - Similar to American donut but laced with a sweet and sour glaze

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Incomprehensible

I had to stop reading this story after the first few paragraphs, as it made very little sense and jumped around so much that it was almost impossible to follow. I know the words are in English, but the way they are put together makes them incomprehensible. Please learn how to write clearly before you continue.

FatBottomedGirlFatBottomedGirlover 15 years ago
South African here ....

interesting start ... will stick around to see where it goes. thanx for sharing ... oh snd its BRAAI and Koeksisters don't have a drop of sour in them ..... :) see you at the next installment...

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