Rattling Snakes Cage 3 Ch. 02

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"Maria come over here baby."

When she didn't move he went over and lifted her off the bed and carried her over to window. Tying the end of the sheet around her waist over the old tee shirt she was wearing he told her.

"I'm going to put you through the window and lower you down, the sheet is not going to be long enough but I'm going to untie it at this end and ease you down. I want you to go over the road and wait for me.....do you understand."

When she nodded he kissed her, "I love you baby.....just remember that." And he lowered her down holding the sheet and then undid the end easing her the rest of the way to the ground, coughing as the smoke began to fill the room, starting to take his breath away as it filled his lungs.

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mokkelkemokkelkeover 13 years ago

oh oh the plot thickens. maria got out, now please don't let tony die, he doesn't deserve that. i agree with the prior comment, he'd be a good person to start of looking into what happened and find out who's really behind it!

IzkaPlm18IzkaPlm18over 13 years ago
LIVE!!!

Lol Make Tony and Maria survive!!!! :) Because Tony could start investigating who would do this blah blah blah and find out about the other people that were killed by 'arson' and maybe start drawing the conclusion and trying to find and get in contact with Patrick and Jerry to warn them etc.

But great chapter!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I agree ...

Let Tony make it out alive ... surely his love for Maria will pull him through this and they will escape. But, will Snake find out they made it out?

I can't believe those still living in the area ... John & Tony ... were not aware that Snake wasn't dead. I can see the others so far away not knowing, but they really should have checked up on that once they got to Spain ... can't believe Patrick and Jerry made that mistake.

The suspense is killing me ... surely Snake won't get ALL of them and live ... but I'm guessing he's going to hit everyone and it will be Patrick & Jerry to be confronted last. Hmmm ... will that investigator somehow start liking Patrick and let it slip that Nick is coming?

While I really didn't want you to write more, and I can't resist reading it ... I have to say you are doing a fantastic job bringing us up-to-date on where everyone is and what they are doing 2 years later. You have just the right touch for writing a little bit about each character, then switching off to write a little bit about another and then back to Snake, etc. ... it is just right ... not too much and not too little. Excellent job well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
No Not TONY!!!

He is a dream to have. Please fix that

Scurvydog44035Scurvydog44035over 13 years ago
No dont kill Tony

So sad. Dont kill tony please. He is a Knight in shining armor for Maria.

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