Raven Walks Ch. 13

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She fell asleep not knowing that across town Raven saw it all and felt it all in his mind's eye, since Constantine had been one of his own.

She'd never know how deeply it had hurt, or the tears he had cried.

He'd done everything he knew to do – but she was too far gone to save now. She could never go back to humans now – they'd never be able to fill that yearning from which she'd now burn.

It was only inevitable that, for however long the Creature let her live, she would walk where Raven walks.

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goodwillmagicgoodwillmagicover 14 years ago
Lost respect

Totally lost all respect for her and now totally hate Constantine. He knew what Raven was doing and just didn't care. He wanted so he had. I really thought that she would have a better character than that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
omg

OMG NOOO WHY,OH,WHY did she do that?!?! i mean no,no,no,no she was meant to be with Raven! i thought she loved him? why fuck Constantine?!?! WHY?!?! no no no no i am so totally pissed off at abi now, grrr

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 15 years ago
Hmmm... I've lost all sympathy for her

She loves Raven, so she sleeps with someone he hates. Petty.. immature. Quite like sleeping with her sister's boyfriend. I'm interested in this story but oddly distanced from it as none of the characters are particularly likable. Raven is showing potential though, so perhaps the story will become enjoyable again.

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