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Click here"You held my hand all night, didn't you." Tears ran down her cheeks. She said, "Chucky, I love you, just give me a little time. Thank you, I needed your touch. That was the best sleep I have had in years."
What a returning wounded vet story. What imagination and a daring operation. Kudos to author.
Further chapter or chapters please.
Not bad. Being retired military, I do understand the abbreviated or truncated language. Still, it could use more information. Possibly Chapter-2 in a background filler role, expanding and explaining in better detail what transpired leading up to the final shots fired. It would be nice, along with closing many open holes.
Why would he take her back? Why do these people in these stories get so fixated on to one person when that person treats them like shit?
As it stands, the story is disjointed and half the time sounds like it's in code! Not well written.
This has the potential to be a grwat story; however, I believe you should consider expanding on the plot as it rather trunkated. Also the story ends too soon.