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Ragtag4211Ragtag4211over 6 years ago
What the hell

You start off with a great story then leave us readers hanging with a final paragraph that has no similarities with the story. Why that ending?

Drummond_somedayDrummond_somedayabout 9 years ago
Sorry, I'm not really here emotional reality.

I'm a guy, I come to a site called Literotoca for sex stories. I won't say this was a bad story, it wasn't what I was looking for, and I think maybe I didn't understand it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more

i was expecting more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
not that good

you write like you don't speak english which means you should have enough sense to use a good english editor before posting. do all readers a favor and delete and rewrite this and any other stories you have then run them through a good editor before reposting. and never leave the readers hanging either finish your stories or don't bother starting at all.

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