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"Megan I..."
Mark started then stopping put his hands up in a helpless gesture. I simply hugged him tight. At first Mark put his arms around me, but seemed stiff. I continued to hold him refusing to let him go. After what seemed like an eternity I felt his body relax into mine, and he hugged me back putting his face into my neck.
"Listen Mark," I whispered in his ear. "We've both got a lot to say but don't know how to say it. And I've already screwed up twice. I don't want to hurt you or fight. I'm going to go with mom and dad and that will give us time to clear our heads. I'll come back Tuesday and we'll go out to dinner and talk okay?"
"Okay." He stepped back.
"You going to be alright Mark?"
"I'll be fine sis. I always am."
I smiled and told him;
"I love you little..." Shit! I thought as I caught myself. "Mark." I finished.
He returned the smile sadly.
"I love you to... sis."
*
This concludes the first part of Siblings with Benefits. First off I would like to thank the many of you who have been following my series from the beginning and have taken the time to vote, and also a heartfelt thank you to those of you who have chosen to take the time to write to me. I have only been writing for a short time and your kind supportive remarks have meant a lot to me.
I have received many compliments about how "Story driven" this series is which is a big deal to me, as that is what I have been striving for. I tell anyone who will listen that; "My smut has depth dammit!"
In Chapter 10 Megan will go back to her parent's house where many years ago she seduced her brother and this story truly began. The subsequent chapters (I do not know how many as I write where the story takes me and do not outline far in advance) will take us through a six month period of time during the first year Mark and Megan were sleeping together. These Chapters will be written differently with the introduction of several characters and a lot of interaction with them. It will also show both the beginning of Megan's decline into addiction and Mark's growing darkness as well.
In closing I would also like to send a shout out to a very supportive fellow author who goes by the handle Fist of fury. If you are a fan of my stories and Incest stories in general and have not read his "A Back Rub For Julia" series then you need to! This series definitely sets a high bar for other authors in this category! If you want to find it quick Part one is in my favorite's page.
Once again thank you so much for your support!
Mike (Lovecraft68)
- COMMENTS
4chuckssite3 months agoI do not enjoy angst between supposed brother and sister or lovers. Anger and refusal to listen are turn offs for me, but I have to accept them as part of your story. I almost quit reading but decided to continue to the end not wanting to destroy the continuity. I’m looking forward to more clarification of their earlier life before going forward in whatever direction you choose for them. I don’t care for violence, but you stories usually come out ok in the end.
Middlesonalmost 3 years agoIm not grammar police so wont touch that part. What i will say though is i applaud your story telling and the ability to give some insight into the characters feelings and emotions. Im eager to continue readi g in hopes that the siblings find what they truly need and deserve which is a happy ending of each other fulltime
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoYou're for your, it's for its, and, in general, plurals constructed with 's, among other systematic mistakes... these detract quite a lot from your work, to the point that it becomes painful reading. I suggest it is a good idea to do a good editing throughout looking for these errors. Using a modern editing program it would not take that much
Anonymousover 8 years agoHi There, really like the work you have done so far, my one qualm would be grammar, correct use of your, you're, there, their and they're, also correct use of proper nouns. Sorry but I am a bit of a grammar nazi.
