Someone I Used To Know

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He planned on leaving but his feet wouldn't move. He wanted to walk right back up there to her but his feet would not budge so he just stood there watching her open the store and greet people. After a couple of hours she closed and left with the man. He finally had enough and drove away. Tomorrow he had a date with her and maybe his words wouldn't hide from him. But he would win her back no matter what.

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Lane1671Lane1671about 8 years ago
Time line issue?

Great effort. You might want to amend the time frame from culinary school to the NYC opening. It's difficult to believe that she attended/graduated culinary school and opened 6 bakeries in three years.

islandqtislandqtalmost 12 years ago
Interesting but

Not sure how I feel about him compromising his identity (7 tats?) because she decided that was "the way" to express herself. Her other complaints were ligit though about him not being as supportive as she would have liked him to be but to measure living life by drinking, inking, smoking seems a bit immature at best. I hope he calls her out on this despite his great love for her.

CoCoNiy101CoCoNiy101almost 12 years ago
I love that song, But I didn't notice it in your writing...

Anywho, this was great! Sunny is so uncool for what she did. She didn't even give the man a chance to adjust to her new interests. And I'm actually really glad Kyrian didn't give her the satisfaction of being completely obsessed with her arrival. Kudos to you.

secretshy16secretshy16almost 12 years agoAuthor
to cantbuymy

cantbuymy, I am so sorry that you feel like you have read this before. I try to keep my writing original, I actually got the idea from the song "Someone I used to know" by Gotye. I had no intentions on sounding like a repeat, I will try harder.

cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 12 years ago
i have read this some place before

not sure where but it know the lines before i read them. but i do like your other stories about professor and crazy.

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