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Click hereI stripped down myself and joined her in the warm water. I washed every part of her body. I was surprised that when I went to clean her pussy it was dripping wet with her own juices. I thought it would have been too sore, and my touch would hurt her. I was wrong as she grabbed my hand and rubbed it up and down. I fingered her to another orgasm, and turned off the water. I dried her off with a towel, and carried her to the bed. I went to the bathroom to dry off myself.
When I returned Kim was face down on the bed with her ass in the air. I asked her what she was doing, but all I got was her handing me a tube of lube and a big smile. No words were spoken as I fucked my wife in the ass until I came in her. We both drifted to sleep immediately.
The next morning Kim confessed to me that she didn't want all those guys to take her, but her body reacted in ways it never had before. She told me that near the end she came constantly. She also confessed that the woman eating her pussy was a big turn on, and she loved it when she screamed into her pussy. The vibrations gave her the best orgasm of her life.
Kim saw a hurt look on my face that I could never give her what she had on the subway. Kim grabbed me, and told me not to worry. That I am more than enough man for her and no woman could replace me. She also told me with a smile that I will be the only man she will allow to fuck her in the ass, and that we will be definitely doing it more often. She never mentioned me fucking those two young women, so I had no idea if she saw any of that or not.
We made it back on the plane for our trip home, and Kim grabbed a blanket and put it over her. I thought she was going to sleep until she took my hand and placed it under her dress. Kim was not wearing panties, and was wet as could be. The fun part of the flight was watching her face as she tried not to make noise as she came around my fingers.
I think I will like this new Kim.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoGreat story, but oh dear another loser releasing the slut inside the woman he loves, it will only be a matter of time before she craves more cock than he is happy for her to have, and divorce, tears blah blah blah to follow.
goldenstarletabout 2 years agoSounds like the wild imaginings of a guy who's never even seen a woman cum let alone made it happen.
A lot of stuff just doesn't make any sense, for example:
Having a go at "the brunette" for not helping when Kim is being raped... Um... You're her husband buddy where the fuck were you...
"The brunette had an orgasm" from what? Licking pussy and getting slapped on the ass? That doesn't make anyone cum.
"I didn't want her to freak out so I blindfolded her." SHE'S NOT AN ANIMAL. Humans aren't suddenly calm when you blindfold them, especially when they're being raped by a stranger on a crowded subway train. It's concerning that you don't seem to see the difference between a woman and an animal. Getting major incel vibes from that tbh.
There is an example of this kind of stupidity in almost every paragraph so I'll stop there for now and move on to your actual writing style, which I would call "basic".
There's so much repetition, especially of "Kim" or "my wife" but also other words and phrases, when it just isn't necessary because it's really fucking obvious who or what you're talking about.
One of my favourites was when you told us she was wearing panties, stockings and heels. The next sentence someone ripped off her panties. Then the next sentence you tell us she's standing there in only stockings and heels. NO SHIT SHERLOCK. Jesus Christ how dumb do you think we are that we couldn't work that out for ourselves.
I could not roll my eyes any harder honestly.
It's a shame because the story could be really good if only it was written by someone competent who is not an incel.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoCould have been longer, through more fucking of different types of men - and of course stacking the women in differnet ways. Really enjoyed this story. Ok yes, over the top - but isn't that why a lot of us come here. You done real good! Write more... tanya brown
Anonymousover 2 years agothese stories just dont get any better and that ant a complement. dont you realize what a fucking load of crap you are writing. no woman would want that treatment and no man would put up with it, its just unbelievable shit
Anonymousover 2 years agostarted off well then went from the Sublime to the Rediculous,I know it is fantasy but it certinly went OTT
