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I really hope you enjoyed this -- there is definitely more to come! Please give me any feedback you feel inclined to leave. Thanks...
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JustSexual_4321over 3 years agoUsually when someone prefaces a story with, I like to start with a back story it means the story is 3 or 4 pages before anything happens. But yours was just the right amount of intro and build up. Nice work. Watch out for the adjectives, another story for another day... When you write that think about it and then take it out - too cute. And when it turns sexual, slow down. I mean really slow down. Be a bit more descriptive with the details. All in all, I liked the hell out of it and it's now a favorite. Cheers~
liz33ndover 5 years agoThe first one is for the start of a wonderful time. I like this. Four stars
