HELLO EVERYONE!!! After spending the last two months falling in love with this site and the authors I decided to try my hand at it. This is my first story and it was inspired by member sxy_kitten and her story "Can I". I hope I did a good job and you guys enjoy it. I am open to criticism, tell me how my voice was, pace, story etc. I am liking this site more each day and plan to do more stories. Enjoy it guys.
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MY LORD!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. enough said.
WOW!
ok, yes i know this was some time ago, and you so have improved, but still this is still a WOW audio for me, than you for letting contuine to hear you, again and again. i cant wait for more
WOW, can you say WET?
First off, I know this was some time ago, and you've improved. On here your voice kept pausing repeatedly, and I can "hear" why, but just a bit more practice on smoothing your voice. And I promise you, that you would kill every woman with that voice of yours. Loved this story!!!
It was SCORCHING HOT!!!!
I'm actually sweating, and extremely wet. I hit repeat twice. lol. Two thumbs up.more...
oh my lord
That was so hot.. please make more.
Very Good!
This was so erotic, got me so wet. Please make more!!
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