- Loving Wives
- The Gym-Wife
- Page 2
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I pulled my boxers down, my cock heavy, hanging, coated with her dried juices. She immediately took it in her mouth, slurping wildly, tits jiggling. A crowd was gathering at the door, employees, customers, some of her other lovers, the girls I had fucked before.
My cock was rapidly hardening as she handled it, knowing a strong orgasm was waiting. She felt me grow in her mouth, the crowd awed by the act. Hardening, getting slick, the heavy cock in her mouth, feeling her working it hard. She wrapped her tits around the shaft, pumping, whispering.
"Is this what you wanted?"
"Yeah... yeah... you back in control now bitch...?" She licked the head, whispering back.
"I'm sucking your cock... in my husband's gym... in front of all these people... who's in charge?" She winked.
"So when I cum all over your precious tits you will scream out I own you..." groaning as my cock throbbed in her orb-nest. She moaned.
"Anything..." Her lips sucking me in, throating my hardness. People slip into the room, starting to clap in time with her bobbing head. I fucked her tits, feeling how my cum is rushing now, ready soon, fucking her slick tits harder. She was sucking me to the root, pulling out, tit-fucking me more, harder.
I looked down on her as I arched my back.
"Yeah Cyndy!" as I shot a massive squirt of cum at her mouth, then pulling back, spraying her tanned heavy tits with my hot white load! She sucked in the first shot, face still perfect except for the lipstick rubbed off on my shaft. She leaned back, taking shot the on her tits, leaning in with her face, waiting. I shot squirt after squirt at her skin, her tits, neck, face, mouth. She moaned out.
"I'm soo fucking yours..." She took the wedding ring off, rubbing it in cum on her tits, tossing it into the crowd. I groaned as I shot more, arching my back and shaking as I let myself empty my load onto her, the crowd falling back around the ring on the floor as if it was toxic. My thick ropes of cum coated her tits, those perfect tanned orbs, with my jizz. She was stunned at how much and how hard I could cum, moaning out as another squirt hit her mouth.
"I'd heard but..."
Finally I stopped, shaking as the last drops drip on her tits, watching her, kneeling before me, her top open and chest covered in my white load. She was rubbing the cock-head on her lips, glossing them, smiling I shuddered as I watched her, the crowd stunned, some rushing out, others staring.
She stood up, pressing herself to me, whispering.
"Kiss me? Please... I need it..." I kissed her hard, wrapping her in my arms, pulling her to me, knowing that whatever happened next, she would always be mine, because I had dome something to her noone ever had before, nor were likely to do to her in the future.
The end
- COMMENTS
Lickideesplitover 10 years agoIt makes no difference if she is currently married or not. Hubby has no 'part' (direct or indirect) in this abortion of a story! Therefore, this is NOT LW...nor is it readable...nor is it believable...nor is it even interesting. Pull it out of LIT, and de-gauss the hard-drive it is stored on.
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Anonymousalmost 17 years ago<p>First, conceive the storyline. Then verbally go thru it a couple of times. Then write the story without masturbating as you are doing it. Then read the story without masturbating to it and actually look for all of the inconsistencies. Then, copy and paste it onto MS Word or something similar and run spell-check and grammar check. They aren't foolproof, but they are better than nothing. Then, re-read it again twice, again without masturbating. Make any final changes and then submit it. Once it has shown up, then and only then you can masturbate to your own story.</p>
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<p>You see, when you masturbate while writing the story, you sometimes hit keys that you shouldn't and sometimes you become repetitive in the wrong places. That means that your audience doesn't enjoy the storyline and you end up feeling and looking like a complete and utter fool.</p>
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<p>We all know that you don't want that don't we? So, next time, try and make some sense in your writing.</p>
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Thanks for a decent first effort. Have a great day.</p>
Anonymousalmost 17 years agothe stuff before you write. I am not really sure but it seems like you intended for the guy to seduce and get the married woman as his girl, is that correct? Not really sure. But a question if it is. If someone can seduce a married woman, not to just have sex as it seems she does that often with people, but to leave her husband for him, just why would he assume she would not do that to him also? Oh, yeah, I know you are special and no one would ever do that to you. But you know this woman is already a slut, and if it is that easy for you to get her, just think how easy it will be for the next person.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoWhat was this all about? I really couldn't figure out. And these kind of author expect readers to applaud them for such work and not to complain? Unfuckingbelievable crap!
Anonymousalmost 17 years ago<p>This "story" is unreadable. There's nothing more to be said about it. The bio on this "writer" says he's over 18, but I doubt it. A third grader would do a better job of writing than is demonstrated here.</p>
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