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Katherine leant in, brushing Miranda's flesh softly delicately with the tip of her tongue. Each touch sent a quiver up Miranda's spine. Katherine ignored the gasps, and the pain as Miranda's fingers grasped her own hair, tugging softly. Katherine was too high to notice the pain, as she had succumbed the object of her desires, as she kissed, nibbled her labia, her fanny lips; feeling Miranda quiver with increasing intensity.
Miranda spread her feet wider, as she leant into the door for support. Miranda was close, and she had to cum, here now. The events of the previous hour had caught her of guard. Despite the shock of what she first saw, and heard, her own body, her own sexuality had responded differently, has she became aroused, a fact that Katherine had discovered.
Her legs apart, Katherine accepted the invitation as she leant in, flicking Miranda's clitoris with her tongue, flicking before her teeth joined in, softly biting the prominent clitoris, as it exposed itself from its protective hood.
Miranda sighed deeply, her fingers clenching Katherine's hair more intently, before she let out a yelp, a loud cry of pain, of desire. Katherine had just inserted two fingers, brutally into Miranda's fanny, before almost withdrawing them. Slowly Katherine slid the fingers back in, before almost withdrawing them again. Katherine was finger fucking the hotel maid; in her room as she continued to kiss, bite nibble Miranda's clit.
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Exhausted, and in their soft embrace, they drifted to sleep, spent of their energy. Miranda was curled up in a ball, the foetal position, her head resting on Katherine's breast, as Katherine held Miranda closely, almost in a motherly manner, the sound of the birds filling the room, the soft breeze bellowing the curtains out into the room.
- COMMENTS
Aimie2469about 8 years agoWhat an amazing story; the desire, the need, the self gratification, the seduction and the gradual taking of her own lust.... Then "Crash." Nothing... No active response only a soft embrace and sleep, almost as though it was forgotten that Miranda was a working girl and had, no doubt, further duties to perform. I would have thought her later returning to to see Katherine and make love to her would have been a better conclusion.
This initially gorgeous story suddenly left me unfinished and frustrated by being so incomplete.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoHad to click the "liked it-write more" button since it's awesome but feels unfinished.
I really liked the feminine and sexy and successful business woman who somehow just becomes infatuated with the hotel maid. Now what? Let's see some whisking away of the fair (or dark) maiden back to the city.
For some technical feedback, try and read through or have somebody edit your story more before posting as there are a few instances where words are repeated or used in two consecutive sentences as if they hadn't already been used (search the word "intrigued" in the last chapter as one example of this).
Great writing on the whole, however as another side note, 'if' the character lives in New York City (wasn't really clear now that I am thinking about it) and is American (? is she?) then the word "fanny" is used very infrequently and more often by the elderly referring to the rear-end of a person; just an fyi should you care to know.
WolfiesRainbowalmost 15 years agoAlthough there were a few grammar errors I seen the story had a great set up, plot and execution. I enjoyed it a lot! Keep up the good work and keep on writing!
