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That night, as I snuggled under the large quilt that was placed on the cabin bed, I dreamt of green, seductive eyes that bore into my very soul when they looked at me. I dreamt of powerful arms enveloping me and strong hands doing wicked things to my body. I dreamt of Tripp Carson.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI first read this series 3 years ago. Ever since I've found myself coming back every now and then to reread it. This is certainly one of my favorite stories and I have never found one like it since. Thank you, I will forever have cowboy fantasies.
robertlover 9 years agoI just discovered your series and am glad I did. You're doing an excellent job of telling a great story. I don't know if you're still out there paying attention to these comments, but I hope so. I certainly can't wait to continue reading.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoApparently, you're another author who went to school under the "No child left behind" rule. If you had attended school during my era, you would have had to repeat third grade." (I graduated high school in 1958. Yeah, I'm an old fart.)
There is a VERY simple rule to use when using pronouns, such as I/me, us/we, him/he, her/she, them/they, etc. Just leave out all the words pertaining to the other person in the sentence. On your first page, you wrote, "Tripp's like a son to Jack and I." Now, if you apply the easy rule, and leave out 'Jack and,' and rewrite it, it comes out as, "Tripp's like a son to I." Sounds awful, doesn't it? So the sentence should have been, "Tripp's like a son to Jack and me." Just after that, you wrote, "Loves Jack and I, too." Now, apply the rule... "Loves I, too." It's obvious that it should have been, "Loves Jack and me, too." Do the same thing with all sentences when you have to decide which pronoun should be used. After a while, it becomes natural. As I read these stories, I mentally correct all the misused words. But eventually, I get annoyed with people who want to write without having the basic skills.
I thoroughly enjoyed your story, but the misuse of the English language bugs me.
I know this comment is much too late, but maybe you can go back and read this and try to use the "rule" to 'write more better' in the future! Good luck.
Anonymousover 11 years agoBut some devilish typos!!!! Keep up the good work and try to get someone to proof read it if possible.
