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Her sobs lessened until she had finally cried herself out. She slipped all the way down in the water and held her breath. Chella gasped and pulled her back up.
"Dear child, you mustn't do that. Everything happens for a reason. And you may not think so right now, but at some point you will start to see that everything will be just fine." Chella soothed, stroking her wet hair back. At that moment, a few shouts filtered down from Master Nathan's working rooms. It was obvious that someone was getting the third degree from the boss...that someone was Vico. Chella smirked. Served him right for what he'd done.
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- COMMENTS
alyssacouslandover 13 years agoI think this first chapter is very well written! I like the descriptive style and find myself wanting to read more!
Great work! :D
bad_girl69over 14 years agoOk. You have be intrigued. I do hope you continue. I am very curious as to what Nathan was shouting at Vico... :) Serves him right!
