The Predator

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His and her view of an encounter in the park.
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dab10
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His view

There she is so beautiful I know what she wants deep down in my soul.

Oh my god those legs

I know instinctively. I feel this is the only girl for me.

I got to think, but I can't get past my instinct.

I can see how this will go down.

I will sneak up on her.

I will grab her

I will have her

She will birth my children

I know I wouldn't be around to see it

I can wait no longer.

Starting out I move so quite and slow,

I know any sound even a vibration and the game is up

One step at a time

Closer and closer

Still she is not aware of me

I am so close her smell is hitting me like a brick

The excitement growing in me

I let the instincts take over

Past all thought now I dart in

As I get to her she starts to move

I start rubbing her abdomen

Caressing time and time again

She freezes not moving a mussel

Like I knew she would

I try to get her in my embrace

She starts moving woops I stopped rubbing

Starting again she is frozen once more

I arrange my self behind her

And get us both ready for me to mount her

Still rubbing she is so soft

Feeling her as I touch her again and again

Bigger then I thought

But so beautiful

I know I am going to impregnate her

She will have my children

Oh so slowly I enter her wow what a feeling

She moved

I stopped rubbing

I start again an she is like a statue once again

I am pounding away

Thrust and rub

Thrust and rub

She likes it I can feel her quiver

I shoot my seed inside her

I just think how she will swell when the seed takes hold

Oh wow that was so awesome I can't think

She is starting to move

Dam I stopped rubbing again

So I rub some more and she stops moving again

Caress and rub

It is time for me to get away

Caress and rub

So I stretch as far as I can still rubbing

Then I turn and run

My legs are a bit weak but I get a good head start

In to the bush

Ah I am safe

What

Ouch

Pain in my neck

Dam I thought I was safe

Blackness

*

Her view

I was waiting for dinner time

I was on the web

Waiting for someone to come on

To make dinner plans

Alone in the park

I am not scared

I am a big girl

Large for a female

I am here a lot

Never more then some cat calls

Or maybe the bird

Something comes up behind me

As I start to turn

And starts stroking my belly

I stop

I am frozen

I can't move at all

Fear rage and I can't make myself move

I am more angry then scared

But nothing I try lets me move

I feel him move behind me

Please let me go

Rapping his arms around me

Oh he stop rubbing

I can move

Just a little

Dam he started again and I am lost

My body is betraying me an is preparing to mate

My hair stands on its end

Oh god it is my fertile time

He is going to make me a mother

I feel him enter me

Oh how I hate my body for reacting like this

He stop rubbing maybe I can ... dam he started again

Why is this stopping me from moving?

How can his rubbing do this to me?

I feel him start pounding at me oh my body is quivering

I can feel him fill me up with his sperm

And know I will be a mommy soon

He stopped rubbing if I can grab him

Fuck he started again

If I can I will kill him

He slowly moves away still stroking me

He turns and runs

I can move

Now I will kill him

I chase after him

We are both moving a bit slow

Both stumbling a bit

But I am catching up to him

He goes in to a bush and I jump on him and grab his neck

I rip his head off

Knowing I am going to need more food for my babies I eat him

Crawl back to the middle of my web and see

If anyone else is going to join me

For dinner

Life is lonely for a black widow

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SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeabout 6 years ago
Great story!

So unexpected.

Top rating from me.

DrSemblanceDrSemblanceover 7 years ago

VERY creative !

well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved this

Very hot and perfect ending.

CarcamCarcamover 8 years ago
Beautiful!

WOW ! About two weeks after I read this story for the first time, I saw two Praying Mantas's mating - - the same thing happened !!! I had to read this story again .Great story writting, I love your style - please KEEP writing !!

CarCam

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