The Price of Forgiveness

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With everyone's eyes on me, I bypassed the long viewing line and walked right up to the open casket. Ann had lost a ton of weight but all in all looked about the same as I'd seen her at the auction. I didn't kneel or even acknowledge the people to my right or left that we now crying.

"Ann I told myself that if you died before me that I'd spit and dance on your grave," I said softly. "I'll never forget what you did to me, but if it will give you any comfort in the after life, I forgive you." I turned around, walked past the gawkers, out the mortuary, to my car and left.

Rhonda comforted me that night as I again told her how much I loved her. We fell asleep in front of the fireplace as I ended an ugly chapter of my life.

Now Ann's kids are starting to e-mail every week, telling me what's going on with them and how they want me in their life. Have I answered any of their e-mails yet? No. Do I plan to? I'm not sure. Who knows, maybe one day before I die.

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secretsalsecretsal26 days ago

The conversation with Ann has a nice comedy vibe to it, maybe partly because of her mostly deadpan deliveries, and the inconsistencies - she was screwing around because the sex was too good, or the guy didn't know how to use his dick, which one is it? Fun story, if only for the pigheadedness.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Four stars for an unhappy story with characters it's hard to like. The tale could have gone in many directions, but this is the one the writer chose. Again, four stars for a well written tale that it is hard to like.

JPB NOT BOB

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

@grassisgreener. YOU DO CUT OFF KIDS LIKE THAT. THEY WERE ADULTS AND CHOSE EVIL. Immoral choices deserve bad consequences . IRL, you may or may not eventually forgive them, but there is nothing wrong with not forgiving. Sentimentality is most often poisonous and oftenresults in a lack of justice.

GrassIsGreenerGrassIsGreenerabout 1 month ago

He deserved kids like that. What an ass. So they took their mothers side. She was wrong and so were they. Don't cut off your kids. Sorry

bacchant2bacchant2about 2 months ago

Writer hasnt written for years, so not much point in commenting. Regardless this was spoiled for me by death and childish obsession with size.

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