The Solitary Arrow Ch. 16

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She smiled, feeling that she had cause to be pleased, in either case.

********** Author’s Notes **********

I would like to thank all the readers of The Solitary Arrow for their ongoing commentary and criticism regarding this work. I am constantly striving to better the quality of this tale and welcome all constructive criticism, suggestions, and corrections. (EDIT 1.0)

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

this being one of the first stories ive read on this site, I was really impressed with the depth of the plot and how the reader can come to enjoy and be engulfed by this story. KEEP WRITING PLZ

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
brilliant

these stories are absolutly brilliant loving the way that it is an actual story unlike other submissions just like to say keep up the excellent work

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Wonderfully Written

The journey continues. And it's better than ever. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
A wonderfully entertaining sci-fantasy novel

Love the story and the charcters. You have a very good way with filling out the people and the setting while keeping the story going. I like the adventure part better than the porn and would love to see a story written with the adventure as the main focus and the sex as just part of the story. I feel that right now you are trying too hard to include lots of sex and it is taking away from the flow. Please don't get me wrong I like the sex and think the idea of a fey of lust is great. I loved the sexy catwoman in your other series. This series could very well be made into a book but would need some editing. Keep up the good work!

Fallen Angel

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
very well told story

I can not weight for the next chapter.

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