- BDSM
- The Visitor
- Page 2
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I stand up and grabbing my clothes, head to the bathroom to tidy up and collect myself. Never, never had I experienced anything like that. It was like being sucked directly into a totally nasty porn, but even more.
Returning to the living room, Kevin and his girlfriend are still on the couch. I'd seen a side, hell, several sides of him that I had never suspected. A total badass, a sexual control freak, and now this. He looks like a guy nursing a sick and injured kitten. So gentle, so careful. And there's no mistaking the emotion in his eyes as he looks down at the exhausted, abused girl in his arms.
I clear my throat. "So we're still on for poker Friday night? Here? Usual crew?"
"Yeah, Friday night. Sure."
I nod, pulling on my coat, slipping into my shoes. My hand on the front door latch I turn back. "Um... will she be here? Like tonight?"
Kevin nods, "Yes, I believe she will be." He's smiling and looking slightly evil again.
I'm surprised when I glance at the girl and she is looking straight at me. Her eyes are red rimmed, she must have been crying at some point, but that enhances the colour, making them seem very green and almost glowing. I nod a bit awkwardly to her.
Just as I turn I away I notice a smirk, a knowing smile that Kevin cant see and she gives me a long, slow wink. As I close the door behind me I'm left wondering just who is in control of this D/s thing.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agoReally hot and extraordinarily well written. Your point of view was always crisp and clear, and I was never confused about who was doing what to whom, which can be a problem with multiple partner stories.
Loved it!
Azrael556about 12 years ago"As I close the door behind me I'm left wondering just who is in control of this D/s thing."
That's a really good question now, isn't it? Is the doms who do all the work, or you subs who consent to having the work done?
Anonymousover 12 years ago"I prepare to Fuck my cock greedy slut"!! Wow!! What a turn on hearing those words, I was imagining myself saying that to my Grandmother..........it took me a minute to catch on but once I did I fell into the groove of her pussy just like her master ...........you write divinely .......yes, you certainly do!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoHi, I would like to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. I have never read your work before, but this story was so excellent that I will now go back and read your other work.
I have read quite a bit of literotica in my 46 years, this is the most exciting story, well written with a gripping subject, and most enjoyable reading I can remember.
What I found particularly poignant, was the minute details of the couple that the visitor was missing. Putting down the beer on the nightstand before enjoying some, plowing right into the mouth without investigating the power he had been given over the sweet sub by her master are the 2 instances that come immediately to mind.
I also think the multiple points of view the story is told in enhances the action and flows naturally. I don't think you could have achieved the same thing with this story by limiting it to just one pov.
Anyway, those are my preliminary comments. Thank you so much for your work. C'mon people, show some love!
