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Ian felt as if he was about to snap. "Don't forget that I have known her for years. I know her better than she knows herself, and so if I was to tell her to stop talking to you, you better damn well believe she wouldn't hesitate."
Calmly Calvin laughed. "Like to see you try." He stated.
Ian stepped up to him. "Don't worry, you will get your wish." He growled, before storming out. Knowing that if he stayed any longer while being intoxicated, he was going to do something that he really would regret. Outside the coldness sobered him a bit as he paced the sidewalk, 'I can't fucking believe this.'
Walking over to his car he made sure it was locked securely before he tucked his hand inside his jacket, and began to walk. Deciding to walk to Samantha's apartment located a block away, was a last minute decision. An instead of driving he walked to clear his thoughts, he had to figure out what he was going to say to his little gutsy friend.
~*~
Samantha crawled on her bed, holding a big bowl of popcorn; as she grabbed the remote and hit play. Clapping her hands loudly the lights in the room darkened, leaving the room illuminated in soft lighten that circle the entire perimeter of her room. Settling into her bed under the thick covers, she started; holiday in handcuffs. Excited to be watching one of her favorite Christmas movies, on a peaceful Thursday night while being tucked comfortably in her bed. Popping her buttery snack into her mouth, she hummed along to the intro.
Melissa Joan Hart quirky character displayed on the screen as the movie began, and she mouth every word. Knowing the movie from beginning to end, normally she loved watching the flick with Ian but since they still weren't talking it was out of the question to hang out with him. She still couldn't believe the things that took place between them, even now. Just the memory of Ian holding her against the door touching her, made her want to cum. Staring at her with his sexy eyes, and thick curly hair flowing, captivated her. She always thought he resembled Cam Gigandet, and she was a sucker for Cam Gigandet. But no one would ever know that little secret, she vowed.
Telling herself Calvin could be her future. When she told him what happen between her & Ian, it had made her feel so much better. But she didn't particularly feel good about not telling him the whole truth. She just couldn't see herself saying all the things that Ian was about to do to her to him, so she would just talk to her friend Caroline tomorrow when she went in for work about the situation.
~*~
'Fuck its freezing.' He thought, walking into the lobby of her apartment building. The guard on duty knew him fairly well, and so he had no problem with going directly up to her apartment. Knocking on the door he heard Kristie shout "who is it?"
"It's me, Kristie open the door." His voice was stern, daring her to disobey him.
After some hesitation on her part she finally opened the door. Allowing him to push past her, and head straight for Samantha's room.
"Stop Ian, she doesn't want to talk to you." Kristie said, to which he just ignored her.
He walked directly to the door, stopping once he heard talking. Not think logically he assumed it was her on the phone talking to Calvin. So he pushed the door open and barged in, slamming it behind him.
~*~
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoIan is more petulant than the dominant he tries to carry himself as. First of
all he likes Samantha, if he was so grown he'd man up and actually tell her instead of trying to control her love life knowing he won't even come to terms to how he feels about her. I don't know how Samantha, a black woman is even letting a white man feel that entitled to her person, best friend or not to the point of controlling her love life, like girl what are you doing?? I'm hoping she gains a spine through out the story but I don't have much hope
Comentarista82almost 9 years ago...although the grammar still needs work. You did include greater description of Sam, so that's a plus since you said readers asked and you did so.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoNot a bad story, but the wrong word use and the grammar overall detracts from the writing. Verb/tense agreement, the proper use of contractions, etc all make a story flow very fluidly. If you have any friends who are willing to invest some time in proof-reading your story, make use of their services. Sometimes it is hard to capture grammatical errors when looking at our own work, especially on the computer screen. Also, it is good to print a hard copy of the story and make edits there. It is easier to catch any mechanical errors that way. Reading the prose backwards (hard copy) also helps. I write for a living (not stories, mind you), and that was one of the tricks to catch the typos.
Anonymousover 10 years agoGood for you...with practice comes perfection. That being said, you have a lot of potential at becoming a great writer. Thankfully you don't care about people who are quick to criticize. :) Constructive criticism welcome,..destructive, ignore.
