Tinkle Bell Ch. 21

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I wrote her back of course, asked her how she was doing, what her life was like, did she miss me...etc. A week later getting a letter back from her in the mail. She answered all my questions, almost as though on automatic pilot, something missing in the way she wrote to me. Nothing about missing me, hoping to see me again one day, none of that. All she had said was that she'd been very busy at the vineyard, something about her dad not feeling well, though she had guessed that he'd said that, been doing that, by way of getting her more involved in the business. Which is what she had done.

She had signed that letter, "Yours truly, Bella."

It was two weeks later before I even thought about sitting down to write her again. I finally did so, already resigned to the fact we had in fact had our last night together and there was no point in pretending otherwise. She was living her own life now, there at her vineyard, no doubt working side by side with her father, uncles and aunts, and a whole slew of cousins from what little I had actually gathered. Bella had a new life, her own life...and it didn't include me. I wrote, telling her pretty much the same thing. I was only a short week or so from finally graduating myself now. Already thinking about where in the world I might disappear off to for a while, collecting and gathering myself finally using the tickets that mom and dad had given to me nearly a year ago now. I sent off the letter, wishing her luck in life, signing it, "Always your friend...David."

Several weeks went by and she never wrote me back. I'd pretty much written her off. Now graduated myself, making plans, even trying to decide if I might invite Dee to go with me, that or a new girl I had recently met, Anna. Though she reminded me too much of Bella, and I wasn't sure I was all that ready for a relationship like that again. In fact, I actually had a date with Anna that night, and had gone upstairs to my room in order to get ready for it. As I did, I happened to glance over, saw that there was actually an email waiting for me to read on my computer. I decided I'd better read it, one thing Anna wasn't shy of...was titillating me with a few naughty arousing pictures. We'd both been doing that a lot lately, so I more or less assumed she was priming my pump here just before going out together tonight. I opened the email file and sat there looking at the "From to" address in bold type waiting to be read.

It said simply: B & R Vineyards

I sat down, holding my breath for a moment, surprised to be looking at that, and then I finally opened it.

"David...Papa is very, very sick. The doctor's say he is dying, nothing can be done to help him now...it's only a matter of time. But I had to reach you, to tell you...this and only this David. I'm sorry for everything, and I know now, though I have also always known, just how much I truly do love you, and need you.

Your Tinkle Bella."

Somehow she'd managed to include one of those smiley face people at the bottom of her email, one with big tits, making them bounce. As somber as her message was, I still couldn't help smiling.

But I also knew I had a flight to book. I was going to Italy, and Bella.

End of Book I

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PerimedesPerimedesover 9 years ago
A wondeful Tale

I thoroughly enjoyed reading the series over the last couple of days. The emotion swirling beneath the surface was very palpable. This is the first erotic story that brought a couple of tears to my eyes as it started to come ta a close. I felt David's frustration and Bella's sorrow. I was, however, not surprised, but very pleased with the ending.

I would be remiss though if I did not, as a fellow writer, offer some critical comments. There was some misusage of vocabulary, 'your/you're,' 'compliment/complement,' 'creek/crick,' etc. There were also spots that didn't flow quite right.

However, having gotten that out of the way, the story, in itself was amazing. You have a wonderful imagination and the setting being with the obviously very well to do also brought out another fantasy that most would never experience either.

And again, as a writer, I aspire to writing such an intricate and sensuous tale.

Kudos.

Perimedes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wishing I had a Tinkle Bell

I'm not a big reader but found that I couldn't wait to read the next chapter.

Hope there's more of Bella.

Jazyjim

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
This story " TinkleBell" has to be the golden globe winner of Literotica

Many Feathers, I have never ever made a comment on Literotica. But I believe that this story really deserves one. the only problem I had with it, is when I came to the end of chapter 20, I found to my bitter regret that I only had one more chapter to go

I am a 80 year old gentleman ( I believe I have the right to call myself that, since I can no longer get it up, therefore I would be able to count the hairs on a woman's pussy with out getting a hard on. And I have read somewhere in the past that, that was the one of the requirements to being a gentleman.)

I discovered many years ago, to my bitter regret, that I was not a word smith artist, there fore I must be contented to be a reader of other word artist works.

I am a avid reader, and have probably read more books and and novels than most people on this web site, and I would classify Tinkle Bell as one of the best, for many reasons.

First of all, and most important. It has made me aware of all the many joys that I have missed, and will never be able to enjoy in this life. Second, It has given this old man, something to remember, with fondness for all eternity.

I will classify this artistic work, as your best. I believe that you will have a hard time trying to beat it. Don't get me wrong, I still love the rest of your work to, it is just that this one deserved a reply. Sincerely,(billwigle@yahoo.com)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fantastic story!!!!

A fantastic story!!! I loved this story so much!!!! Many years ago I became aware of the joys of piss games and I have introduced a number of women to them over the years all of whom enjoyed them very much. I believe that to be the height of intimacy. I know the ancient Chinese were into them as well. Such a great love story as well and having Mom and Dad as well as the staff becoming so free and easy with their bodies and their sexuality made for a great story. It is a shame that religion makes sex into something dirty. Keep up the good work!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fantastic

Loved the story, also would like a book 2 or conclusion.

Even a 46 year old male likes a good love story.

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