'Tis Destiny

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Once again I moved as if I was sleepwalking, a dream though so real, so vivid as I lay down, stiffly, board straight though my eyes couldn't leave hers as she smiled, sitting down on the edge and lifting a hand to push back a lock of hair which had fallen on my forehead. Her touch was cold, like ice but my body was on fire, the combination sending sparks of life coursing through me, a feeling like never before. One she watched, her smile now widening as she placed her fingers over my eyes and told me softly to shut them and listen only to the sound of her voice.

"It's amazing how the human mind works, so susceptible to suggestion, so easily swayed. Take for example your hands, how you can feel them moving together, the web I'm spinning trapping them, binding you." I could feel them move, the sensation of warmth, a tightening as they were captured. "Your arms next, then your legs followed by your ankles" and step by step I experienced that which she described. "We can't have you crying out either" and my mouth too was covered, a warmth spreading over it until finally I heard her say "Open your eyes Mr. Samuels and see if you can believe that which you see."

I did, blinking, still incapable of movement on my own but staring at my bonds, how they seemed to shimmer even in the dim light of the single candle which burned. There must have been confusion in my eyes as she stood, smiling though I noticed now how it didn't reach her lips, the smile a bit cold, calculated as she spoke, "I think it's time for the charade to end and for you to discover that all is not as the eye proclaims" and with that I watched as she closed her eyes and the transformation began.

For a moment, a second in time I began to think this might be a dream, one I might wake from with a scream, the alcohol reeking from my pores, my heart hammering in fear. Instead I could only watch as the woman's hair changed from silver to a luxurious brown, her eyes once gray now burning a hazel tone, her body turning young in appearance and shape until she stood there, a vision in black, a woman I had only seen once across a burning room, it was her.

Your voice was now confident, filled with bravado as you announced, "I hope you'll forgive me for my little play, I knew that it would prove difficult at best to ask you to meet so instead..." as you waved your arm around the room, your eyes though never leaving mine, proving how simple it had been to dupe me. "Oh, and now that I have your undivided attention, I think it's time I enjoy the spoils of my labor, don't you?" You knew I could not respond, your hands working at the buttons and zippers of your garments, piece by piece falling to the floor as you continued.

"I truly did learn the craft from a woman who looked exactly like her. Everything I told you was true except for one small matter; I couldn't allow her to speak to anyone now could I?" You crawled onto the bed, moving like a snake, your body sensuous in its appearance, eyes deadly in their intent. "I can provide a man with the ultimate in pleasure or in pain, depending on his tastes, his desires, his needs. I wonder what your needs are Jonathan, shall we find out?"

Reaching out, your fingertips grazing over my nipples I felt the sting as if they had been suddenly pierced, the pain both immediate and to my surprise exhilarating a fact not lost upon you. Though my face remained impassive, my body must have betrayed me as you smiled, that same wicked smile while saying, "Ah, you require the gift of pain in order to receive pleasure, don't you my pet?"

Another touch, this time lower and I felt the pressure, the pinch of the ring, circulation stopping, my hardness quickly evident as you straddled me, your nipples hard, your own excitement evident in your arousal as you let your hand reach out, touching my eyes and as quickly they clouded over, my sight taken from me as I heard your voice, as if in an echo within my mind say, "I find that you experience so much more if you're trapped within your own body, unable to sense anything, free only to provide me with that which I require for now."

All I remember was time seeming to stand still, your body settling upon me, a sigh escaping your lips. From there you began to move, slowly at first, finding your rhythm, finding your pleasure as I was simply a tool, an instrument to be used. I tried shutting down, my mind struggling only to hear your laughter, the sound filling my head, your voice inside of me saying, "Do not fight me Jonathan, I am far stronger, mentally, physically, you are no match for me though come the end of our time together here you might provide to be a worthy…well, you shall see. For now, I desire my pleasure and I require your pain" and with that I felt my whole body become consumed by a fiery passion, a feeling like never before and thus it began.

It could have been hours, mayhap days but the next thing I can remember was the feeling, your weight upon my chest, your body having finally exhausted its need, sated, at rest. I continued to lie there, feeling a bit of sensation beginning to return, my fingers slowly opening and closing. You stirred at this, your head moving up close to mine, leaning in to whisper in my ear, "I know my prey, you're regaining some of your movement, why within minutes you could probably come to understand the only bonds holding you are those of your mind, easily broken yet desired none the less."

You stroked my hair, the haze over my eyes clearing enough so that I could look into your hazel orbs, intent on staring into mine as you whispered, "I know the life you live, alone, sadness prevailing, no hope, nothing to look forward or to live for, an empty existence which each days threatens to drag you over the abyss, am I right?" There was no need to answer; the single tear which fell from my ear was proof enough. "I can change all that, I can give you everything your heart desires and more Jonathan, all you need do is offer yourself to me of your own accord."

Your eyes now blazed, your voice husky with emotion, becoming louder. "‘Tis a gift like none you have ever received. One that will offer you the opportunity to serve as you've always desired, to taste the joys of the flesh, everything we have to offer each other, no boundaries, no judge, no jury only our own pleasures to consume us. Give yourself to me, join me and together we shall rule." I felt my restraints begin to dissolve, the cloud which had concealed my thoughts begin to lift as my body began to shake and tremble. Your head once again found my face, your eyes wild, animal like in their passion as you said, "I must have your answer my love, and I must have it now."

Once again words failed me yet I still answered in kind. This time by a slight movement, my head falling to the side, my neck open, available and this time when you smiled you did so with your teeth so white, the fangs long, sharp in their appearance and with a cry you took my gift as I screamed my allegiance, my arms pulling you close, my body responding to yours, my life yours…for eternity.

THE END.

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baileytommybaileytommyabout 5 years ago
Undertale

This story didn't make any sense about a guy with mind and a coward to boot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Following the story

Unlike a previous story, this telling was a bit muddled...unclear who was speaking when. I hope this is an early attempt at writing. That being said, I will try reading another of your sharing. Thank you again for your sharing your storytelling skills. L

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I am the characters ;)

Your words lure me in their own web. I AM the lonely drifter, the tracker, the ruthless queen, the helpless victim, the domatrix, the mere mortal, the vampire. I love your use of dynamic character change. Every change is symbolic. You make this story so personal, and anyone can relate to it, because a little bit of everyone is put into those characters! WELL DONE! Bravo! Bravo! When she says she takes their youth in return, I thought she was like the Rock in the Mummy, making them old. Good mystery stories makes a person have a false suspicion. A good captor and captive story. A dynamic character change, because at one point HE was the tracker. He overestimatted his abilities. I would have preffered he break the bounds to prove his own inner strength. Show some fighting spirit. Of course though I doubt at his state he could have. A good read by a good writer. Keep it coming! A female virgin like me needs to read about sex to be prepared! I humbly thank your grace.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Review from Vigdis

I find that your way of telling this story is very interesting and different from that of what many people writes, and it sort of draws me to it with the way you have done it. That you use “I” and “You” is a characteristic in your story which I rather like, though some places you mix with “he” and “she”, and though some places this seems intentional, there’s also places where – it seems to me – you’ve done this unconsciously. Other than that there are very few writing errors, and a couple of sentences that could maybe have been changed to the better but which I’m sure will improve as you continue writing. But your way of writing, story and ideas are really rather interesting; you seem to have a great imagination and this also makes me want to read more of your works, which is a real plus.

Your end – and story in general – is mystics and full of unanswered questions, and even though there are still some unclear things at the end, I find this a really fitting way.

So all in all I must say that this story really got me and I’m looking forward to read more of your works and hope you will continue writing as you do.

I give this a 100, though it would be more something around 85-90, but to me 75 was a bit low, so I give you top scores on the Rates instead.

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