Velvet Ch. 03

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"Make love to me, my son," she said.

At that moment I lowered myself and my hard cock entered my mother's open and soaking pussy. Simultaneously we sighed. I had slid my penis into my desirous mother—it was amazing! Absolutely amazing! We kissed, passionately, for a few seconds when Mom pulled away.

"Give me a moment to get used to you. It's been a while since I had a cock inside of me, more so I never had a cock as big as yours." She was almost apologetic.

I look tenderly into her brown eyes. I knew what she meant. Despite the easy entrance thanks to her well-lubricated hole, I could feel the tightness of my mother's pussy. It felt wonderful to me; it felt like velvet was wrapped around my erection. The wonderful sensation was tempting to me begin thrusting, but I had kind of figured Mom hadn't been sexually active the past several years.

"Don't worry, Mom. Take your time," I offered.

After a few moments, she said "Ok, but slowly." I raised myself sliding my penis almost out of Mom's cunt, but then brought myself down and gently re-entered her.

"Ugh," she grunted. I sighed.

"I love you, Mom" I declared as our torsos began to get in a slow sync of thrusting and accepting.

"And I love you, Paul."

She spread her legs, keeping them straight, and forming a huge V. I knew she was finished getting acclimated to the presence of my penis in her pussy. Mom and I were fucking at a steady pace.

"Ah, uh!"

"Yeah, oh yeah!"

My cock and mind were relishing the wonderful feel of my mother's cunt,

Velvet.

That's what it felt like. Velvet.

"Oh, yeah."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
36's?

WOW! 36 inch tits. They must have hung past her knees, LOL!!! I know this dairy farmer that wants to meet her...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Papa! Faux Papa!

The Not-Too-Old Man and The Sex?

The goof with menstruation nearly made me choke between a gasp and a giant chuckle. Hopefully you were a victim of an auto-prompting word processor and your own lack of simple proofreading before submitting a story.

Kudos on doing or attempting to do a MS story with a more mature set of lovers as we typically get over-eager teen grads lusting after their sexy soccer moms in yoga pants. What matters more though is whether each couple is made to seem real otherwise the particular taboo is negated and it's just garden variety coupling with the words "mom" and "son" sprinkled in for decoration.

You did a better job on their back-story here than with another of your efforts but it was still lacking. A part of it may be due to not seeing how or why the mother got to her mindset. For the male perspective, it's an easier sell to accept any son lusting after any even marginally attractive mother he had an affectionate bonded relationship with. Mothers normally have more of an uphill battle against societal norms.

The over the top way you convey sex scenes based on maybe four of your stories I've read is what lets you down here again. It's way too wordy and unnatural to the point it gets in the way of imagining the actual activity. If you'd use a more common prose style instead of trying to seem like the "Great Novelist" slumming by dabbling in dirty stories it might work a lot better. No reader wants to read modern erotica with a thesaurus at the ready just to figure out which orifice milady doth proffer to her lusty swain verily and forsooth.

Again, you have your lovers self-commenting using dialog way too much in place of just describing the sex action. People deeply into hot sex can barely manage simple syllables like Yes or Uh-huh. If they're clearly enunciating in complete sentences, they're either faking it like porn actors or they not actual humans having actual (good) sex. That nonsense slams the brakes on the whole scenario you've tried to build because it's plain silly. I didn't vote on the first two parts of this as it seems unnecessarily cruel to down-vote the same issue three times for what is really one long story.

girdlelovergirdleloverover 9 years ago
You have done it again

A terrific story, good plot, good job.

GL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
"I never had a cock as big as yours."

Like Paul, plenty of boys'd love to hear their mother tell them that. Paul unloads his young balls up the same cunt he came out of, and he'll do it again and again. Lucky motherfucker.

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 11 years ago
FIVE STARS...

It would not let me indicate on the fifth star. This third chapter was REALLY hot and loving, not just the usual.

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