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Click hereRed Sky knelt beside his wife and took her hand. Snow Bird's eyes fluttered open and smiled at him. "It's a boy," she whispered. "What will we call him?"
Red Sky leaned forward and kissed her, still holding her hand. "I love you, Snow Bird," he said softly, his breath warm against her cheek. "We shall call him Gray Cloud."
- COMMENTS
Horseman68over 6 years agoA very thoughtful author, writing a very sensitive story. Very much enjoyed.
oldwayneover 14 years agoI know that some of the Shawnee sojourned for a time in Eastern Kansas, after being forced out of their homeland. I could see this group perhaps being attacked by the Pawnee. But, I find it difficult to believe that they would have ranged all of the way to Ohio or even Indiana to attack the Shawnee. I did, however, enjoy the story, as I have enjoyed all of your stories that I have read. I consider you to be one of the best authors on this site.
Softly Whispersalmost 19 years agoYour honest and open portrayal is a joy and a delight. I trust you will continue exploring this realm, the research you've done is evident without it being 'overly' evident. Subtle and wonderous
Bridget69about 19 years agoGreat emotional elements to convey the anticipation, yearning and apprehension which comes with being apart. The lovers' eventual reunion and resulting happy ending were also a nice added touch.
