We lay there for a while calming down. I thought she had gone to sleep, but then she murmured. "That was amazing! You are not going to regret these next five weeks, I promise!"
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Amazing girl!
Not only can she text one handed with the phone under the pillow, but she can read texts that way too, without looking at the phone - either the world's first braille cellphone, or the world's most amazing texter.more...
Great read!!
Really get into it right away. Love to see how the next 5 weeks go
and what happens when they leave for college. Severval thoughts come
to mind. Love the catching in tree house-really good. Story flowed well.
Kudos to your writing; kept reader wanted to read and the passion between
the characters. Loved it and look forward to next chapter. Thank you!!!
purplelilymore...
Very Good Writer
It's nice to find someone here who has a grasp of the English lanuage and knows what grammar is. Good job!
Sloppy......
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LOVED IT
this story was amazing. It made my pussy so wet.
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