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In the morning we will leave... return home... likely never to see each other again...
The End.
- COMMENTS
AmazonBeauty1966over 5 years ago... this was an intense short story!! The styling I'm not crazy about but the characters sure came to life in a sultry erotic way ~ thank you :)
Anonymousover 12 years agoFour is the number of times I have climaxed to this series. Thank you. ;-D
Though the writing style is not my favorite, you kept up the energy, the intensity, and the story line. It really conveyed the passion and abandon with which they spent every encounter. Consider visual space, not just elipses in a story written like this. It's more about the breaths and pauses between thoughts and even words, not just using punctuation. Thus the use of elipses, not periods. I'm sure you get that, just adding my $0.10 ; -) I enjoyed this series, and the business trip was a great fantasy to do this with. High fives to your muse ; -P Thanks again!
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ScarletDefiance
