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"We're on our way, Lacey," Rafe said soothingly. "You're not far away and Aaron can take care of himself. Just stay inside your apartment and don't let anyone in unless it's me or Aaron."
She opened her mouth to speak and a sharp cracking noise filled the quiet night.
"Lacey!"
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Artemisjbabout 3 years agoJust in case you ever turn this into a book like FTI, note that you said her cell battery was dead when she threatened to call the cops but then you had her call Rafe with her cell. Maybe she needs to plug it into a charger first. Her urgency and shaky hands would also increase the tension.
Mshaun7over 3 years agoThat was an awesome start and a wonderful cliffhanger! Very nicely written, I look forward to reading the next chapters.
Masterskitten26about 4 years agoI love your stories so very much! Thank you for sharing your imagination and genius mind. <3
Anonymousover 4 years agoI have read this story 2 times already and it’s still one of my all time favs. The series is so good, you are sucked in by all the characters and stay there even more so.
Thanks for such great stories
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoLove your stories. Just noticed it hasn't been fixed so thought I'd mention it but Lacey waves her "Dead Cell" at Aaron, then she uses it to call Rafe inside her apt. All you need to do is edit for a landline instead. Great work.
Xoxo Fox
