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With the dogs barking their heads off in the fenced in backyard, he never heard me walk up behind him.
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
docrobover 11 years agoI love this story. I write myself and I've learned so much from you about story development. You are a literary master.
jimburr35over 11 years agoThe tension builds and, again, you are wonderfully into Fredde's head. The angst and uncertainty he feels is palpable. I, too, was ready to have Fredde kick John's ass but I trust you and your story development and look forward to the next installment.
Sidney43over 11 years agoWe all know our hero is going to kick the losers ass, so why did you stop the chapter right at this point? Frankly, I have no idea why he hid behind the tree as long as he did. Just walk up to the door and cold cock the ex boyfriend and don't subject his lover to any risk because the creep may have a knife, he seems to be crazy enough.
heellovr69over 11 years agoRuhroh Raggy. Can't wait to see what happens next. Very good series.
