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Click hereMaybe because Jamie had been a screamer, now Lynn was getting more vocal. I leaned down to kiss her and before I parted from her lips with my tongue, I whispered in her ear.
"Scream for me, baby. I want to hear you cum."
Louder and louder her pleasure filled the room, until she let out a scream of passion that surely would have awakened the dead had we lived near a cemetery.
There we lay with Jamie on one side of me and Lynn on the other.
To be continued...
Now that I know Freddy's secret .......do I have any volunteers?
ok i have my first and only critique. how does a woman (jamie) that was beaten with a bamboo pole, collapses in the doorway, bruises all over her body, go from that to 'fuck me' within only a few hours(i assume the time)??? other than the super human recovery, im lovin this one...if you were a guy i would say YOU DA MAN!!!
I love your descriptiveness. I look for your name every day I am on the site.
When I saw this chapter this morning I naturally went back to the beginning. I immediately noticed a marked improvement from the one previous story of yours that I read some time back. There is better character development and a better flow to the story. I am going to go back through some of your other works and check out the changes. Keep going, and enjoying. I'm actually looking forward to seeing where you go with this one.
Cheers,