Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad people have enjoyed my first pieces.
Chapter Two of The Best Man up now; Three and Four coming soon. I expect The Best Man to run to seven chapters (I split Three into two, for ease of uploading), and an epilogue, to provide happy endings. Sorry to say, we won't really see Susie for a while though!
If anyone wants to copy these onto other sites, feel free, but please do credit me on the page. Properly. Not some silly piece of small print.
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