I am trying to hone my writing skills and would appreciate any feedback about whether I am successfully writing an engaging story. I am also hoping to excite you!
I am open for suggestion if anyone is looking for something specific in a story then let me know. Always good to hear.
I would appreciate any comments or votes that you have they help me see if anyone is enjoying the story and help me improve.
Location
Planet Earth, Outer Spiral Arm, Milky Way