NOTE: Thanks for all your comments, I will edit the stories heavily criticised regarding the tense and cheesiness, when my studies have calmed down. Thanks again. More criticism the better.
I have a degree in Media Writing and my goal is publish my poetry and erotic and porn flash fiction. I am a very sexual person which enables me to fall into my writing.
I submitted my work on this site so that I could get constructive feedback in bettering my writing. I want another person's view on how to make my writing more enticing. I try my best to make my writing believable by reading out loud to people and falling into the writing myself.
I will amend all my writing each time I am given tips to how it should be. I'm determined.
I admit, I do tend to write when I am horny coz I am always so damn horny, can't help it, but I do try and write when I am not. Although, one good thing about starting to write when I am horny is that I can be more truthful and realistic about the description of feelings.
Big No Nos!!!! (incest/rape/torture/pedophilia/drugged/slavery/Cannibalism/Necrophilia/Lolita/Zoophilia/snuff/sadistic/Bestiality/Scatology)
I enjoy music, writing, hiking and going out with my friends. I'm quite a cheeky girl, naughty but nice and quite broad minded.
Note: I'm quite flattered by all the emails I am getting from people requesting I write stories about their experiences and their fantasies, got a list building up....
Thanks for all the tips in how to improve my writing, it's been very helpful and amazed with some of the comments I am getting, putting a big smile on my face.
Links to my profiles showing my stories: http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions
(Pen Name registered on storiesonline.net - Angel Delight)
http://storiesonline.net/auth/Angel_Delight
Location
UK