Update Feb 2014 As I have said before I appreciate all the feedback. Negative stuff is always hard to read but in the end, more helpful. I will be editing every chapter and reposting them. I will probably rewrite the last two chapters as they are the weakest. It's not that I am burnt out on the story, it's just that I wanted to post something for you guys/gals even though I knew it was sub par (most of the story is IMO). Then I shall finish the series. I work 60-70 hr weeks and I'm in grad school. Between that, working out, having a social life and writing several REAL fantasy novels, I'm a busy guy. But if you can all bear with me, I will finish the series. -Fracture I took the story "A Mother's Awakening" down from the LIT site and posted it for sale on Nook store. More as an experiment than anything. Ch 3 is new and posted with it for the first time. If you don't have the 1.99 to buy it, message me and I'll send you the story. I have just started writing. Please bear with me as I learn the trade. | 
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