English guy, now living in Canada. Fancied myself as a writer, started on this site and since published.
Constantly amazed at the number of people apparently reading these stories but not hanging around to vote or comment. How can over a hundred thousand read and not stay to click a little button or say a few words? I don't want a full critique, just tell me what you like or don't like. Please.
Don't pay too much attention to the descriptions. Sometimes they have been pointlessly changed and poor grammar added. I've tried to correct them but somebody up there doesn't like it.
Location
Was Bristol, UK, now Canada