Please let me know if you like what you read, and how I could do better.

I appreciate any and all feedback that you as the reader could give me. I am still very new at writing stories, and poetry, and respect everyones help.

I have a few other stories that are in the works, hope to get them typed up on the computer in the next few days, and then it will be up to Literotica to decide if they are good enough for you to read.

A big THANK YOU to everyone who has voted for me!

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