- Non-Erotic Poetry
- 'Bout Average
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feel ‘bout average
no poems in my pockets
feel ‘bout average
no souldance in my socks
feel ‘bout average
pretty much a bologna sandwich
feel ‘bout average
no starshine in my heart
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoHow many ways can a person describe apathy? Succinct and to the point.
Anonymousover 19 years agoHonest and direct while maintaining beautiful imagery. Too many people get caught up in what their talking about and drag on, but here everything the poet is trying to say is made clear and impacts me better then if it had been enlarged. I find the first and the last stanza to be particularly appealing.
annaswirlsover 20 years agoI know exactly how you feel, and you did a great job describing it-- You have to excel to be able to appreciate a feeling average day where nothing seems to stand out. Good for you for writing anyway. THAT is what matters.
perksover 20 years agothe last stanza didn't do anything for the poem. I really enjoyed the first two, and the third made the imagery, but even if it were just the first three, the poem would be incomplete.
