- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Will I?
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Click hereWill I break?
Trying hard not to,
under the weight
of a folded napkin
tatooed ni blue
scratching the symbols
forming small words.
Will I fall?
Trying hard not to,
against the hurricane
of whispered words
read out to me,
the sonic blast
of barely heard
lips and tongue.
Will I burn?
Trying hard not to,
while fire and acid
in piercing eyes
and napkin message
engulf the sphere
that is my space.
Will I cry?
Trying hard to,
but all my trying to Not
is still in the way.
- COMMENTS
Linbidoover 20 years agoAuthorYes, it's just a typo. But thanks for the chemistry lession. :D
Rybkaover 20 years agoThat's what I get for reading poems so early in the morning that I haven't had a caffeine fix yet. :(
I guess I was confusing bluing and nickel plating which are two common but totally different finishes on firearms.
Sorry I was giving you too much credit for creativity. :(
Blast that little swirly-whirley, but she is correct.
>?(((><
annaswirlsover 20 years agoNickle when in compounds such as nickle chloride, are a vibrant lime green.... for blue, I would suggest Cobalt compounds which also makes a beautiful magenta compound as well.....or copper sulfate, that is a nice crystal
next: flame tests. Want scarlet? Try lithium.....strontium
where was I, oh, LOST in this poem. I feel like I have been there.... and will stay there for a while... well done Linbido. Fish man, don't mention chemistry, it is so distracting!
Anna<---recovering scientist whose students wrote diamonte poems on the element of their choice...and nicely at that
Rybkaover 20 years ago"tatooed ni blue
scratching the symbols"
Did you really do that? Make the word play of "nickle blue" by purposefully reversing "in", I mean. If so, congratulations. What other chemical symbols can be incorporated into a poem? - AgH! (silver hydride perhaps?) >?(((><
