Coraline Sings

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Linbido
Linbido
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Coraline carves music out of granite
by blowing kisses with tectonic patience
onto every succumbing shoreline
that have felt the soles of lovers
standing pillar posted faithful
staring blindness into submission
at horizons hiding history and others
long since gone

Hear Coraline sing the ballad of waves
crashing her kisses on bare rock and
sloping sand so seemingly eternal
wearing them down to erase
the memory of sorrowed soles
patiently waiting on shores decreasing
for a pocketful of folly dreams
long since gone

Coraline whispers her soothing song
into hearts of her children waiting
for a tomorrow that will never come
Be still my hearts, be dry my tears
yesterday took, the next dawn will give
and breathe a new haven to contain
all your jubilance and love regarded
long since gone

Linbido
Linbido
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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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So many images issue forth from this piece; it lures you back in for another read or two or three...

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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So many images issue forth from this piece; it lures you back in for another read or two or three...

LinbidoLinbidoabout 20 years agoAuthor
there...

I've gone and sumbitted an edit. I still can't believe that I let that one slip by. I checked the text three times.

Hugs and kisses to all of you for putting up with my flimsy. :)

-Lin

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
sole was

THE perfect word choice in that context Lin, it brought to my mind the images of people walking on the beach and I have a tiny foot fetish anyway, but I think it was the best word to use

umm, yeah Liar, I did mean it with a Capital C

< giant raspberry> :)

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