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Defeat Haiku

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Joseki Ko
Joseki Ko
216 Works
179 Followers

A warrior fallen
The agony of defeat
There’s always next time

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Joseki Ko
Joseki Ko
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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
BUT NOT IN THIS LIFE

the next will have to do. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
~~

I don't know ~~ is it senryu or more zappai? Have to think on that one a bit.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
clarity defined.

A haiku of defeat that ends on an optimistic note. Very clear and succinct. Illustration aids clarity.

Dr_VladDr_Vladover 18 years ago
exquisite!

I love the way you expresed that state in such a few words! I only say it because I've been through that, too. Thanks!

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