Spree 9

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Part 10 of the 10 part series

Updated 10/07/2022
Created 12/18/2003
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Icingsugar
Icingsugar
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I took
an indecision
today

to maybe do
or not
something more
than just follow
the path outlined

in the conscious script
that I wrote
yestermoment

that last
inevitable choice

left or right?
coffee or tea?
do you want fries with that?
myplaceyourplacenoplace?

they plead
make up your mind

forgetting
that my mind
is already present

and needs
neither making
nor make-up

so instead
I stand by
my indecision

to maybe
or not
go left
or write

writhe?
maybe
maybe not

just come with me
twist free
of yestermoment's
flowchart script

flip a coin
spin a bottle
take an indecision

make up
new rules

make-up
your mind

and make out
with mine

 

Icingsugar
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Enjoyed

This Spree. Reading this made the words flow like a stream. Nice work?especially this:

left or right?

coffee or tea?

do you want fries with that?

myplaceyourplacenoplace?

they plead

make up your mind

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
a nice splash of words....

the running flow of your run on words rolled nicely. A nice upbeat...

jim :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Neat spree

More minimalistic than your previous spree poems. Different, but equally enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
word play

Clever use of word play. It makes this poem sparkle!

Xtaabay

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